Attack of the 50-Bit Nicelander_WIP Covers

So here it is. Working covers of the fanfic that I am working on.

Well, ONE idea I had do far. There was another but this was the first thing that I put pencil to paper with and as far as basic ideas and such, I find it OKAY. I mean, it spoils some short (as if we didn't know this was going to happen anyway) and I basically just spazzed out on most of it but yeaaaaah. Pencil lines anyway.

I am REALLY looking for ideas and suggestions on this one, mostly because I want a better cover I can post and also I want to know if I got the expressions right. I tried making Genie here look more tussled and less neat than he usually is after everything that happens but if I were to color this, I think it could come out a look better. If I were to follow the sequence that this cover is actually based on from what I wrote, the dude should have a nose bleed but in pencil it didn't look right, and I think that was because of his 'stache. It would have looked like snot had it just been left in outline and I didn't want that to happen.

I need to work on my Calhoun and Felix looks wonky was well but I like the way Nelly came out for some reason. I know she's super tiny (granted, she IS the smallest thing there now!) but I think having her sitting on Ralph and just pointing up in terror at Gene works. I might redo Calhoun but I want to stray away from her just pointing her guns out. I really want her to have this 'WTF' look on her face because this ISN'T a cybug she's facing.

ITS AN ENORMOUS NICELANDER.

Who the hell sees THAT?

So comment and suggest anything. This is not a final and I want to rework some things in this! Thanks everyone!

Link to the story heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere! -----> www.fanfiction.net/s/9886932/1…